Fifty Shades of Why

New York Times #1 bestseller. Adapted from Twilight fanfiction.
This can't possibly end well.

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E.L. loves every word she writes so much that she doesn’t bother to go back and change any of them. Decide “bra and panties” is not enough description? No problem! Just say so in the text. Also, what does “finery” look like? I’ve never seen it on lingerie before.

E.L. loves every word she writes so much that she doesn’t bother to go back and change any of them. Decide “bra and panties” is not enough description? No problem! Just say so in the text.

Also, what does “finery” look like? I’ve never seen it on lingerie before.

Filed under description please stop writing adjective abuse purple prose fifty shades of why lazy writing Repetitive. Repetitive. Repetitive. Anastasia Steele Fifty Shades Fifty Shades of Grey E.L. James EL James 50 shades 50 shades of grey 50SoG 50 shades of why 0339

  1. auntiespaz reblogged this from concertoinc4 and added:
    She says “Oh my” 79 times throughout the entire book. Who the hell is she, George Takei?
  2. concertoinc4 reblogged this from 50shadesofwhy and added:
    “Exquisitely-designed” is a compound modifier. NOW! NOW IS THE TIME FOR DASHES!
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